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''Anorexic (Stitch it up!)''
Contributed by
xMizeriex
on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:26:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You're apt to decieve and had me easily mistaken,
You engendered a hatred and I was forsaken,
Your cellophane wrapped me up in this fuge,
DEBAUCHEE! And I can't rid myself of you,
But now you stand decrepit, ensanguined,
I will watch this decomposition,
As you seperate into your perverted elements...
Parasitic and flexuose, you make me choke,
Sharpen your claws with your fists down my throat,
But you can't ABASE ME!
Can't erase me,
Because despite your actions, making me sick,
You can't make me Anorexic!
Brazen and Brackish, encumberance made stone,
Celluloid, facsimilie, monotone,
I am emancipated from your immoral restraint,
Your echos that burdened me now ring so faint.
And now you lay, HUMILIATED!
Released from your grasp and I can breath,
Free of this psychological emphysema...
Parasitic and flexuose, you make me choke,
Sharpen your claws with your fists down my throat,
But you can't ABASE ME!
Can't erase me,
Because despite your actions, making me sick,
You can't make me Anorexic!
Don't try to cauterize me,
The only callous' will be on your feet,
From when your path of lies cut your flesh like glass,
But now you diminish, obselete.
Tou tried to suck me dry,
Try to make me ANOREXIC!
But I will lick my broken heart clean,
And STITCH IT UP!
Parasitic and flexuose, you make me choke,
Sharpen your claws with your fists down my throat,
But you can't ABASE ME!
Can't erase me,
Because despite your actions, making me sick,
You can't make me Anorexic!
YOU WILL NEVER MAKE ME ANOREXIC!
So choke on this...
Written by Beth Martell, 20th August 2004, (c)
Copyright ©
xMizeriex
... [
2005-02-07 08:26:31]
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Re: ''Anorexic (Stitch it up!)''
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:45:04 AM AEST
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Ok can I suggest to you to use a spell checker, coz this poem had tons of spelling errors. Although the poem was written well the only problem was the typos.
Jane x |
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Re: ''Anorexic (Stitch it up!)''
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:07:08 AM AEST
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| Typos or not, I read through it no worries, cool write, full of feelings both sad and in rampart anger, excellent poem |
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Re: ''Anorexic (Stitch it up!)''
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by DeathChild on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:07:55 AM AEST
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| The stuff I'm all about.If this was a song...I would listen to it day and nite |
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