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Memory of a Liar
Contributed by
creed
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:37:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A memory
left to linger,
left to torture
the soul that remains
To the liar
the one who stripped down my mind
and turned me into
who I am today.
Look at me
and learn from my pain.
You ripped out my heart
and displayed it for all to see.
Copyright ©
creed
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2005-02-07 17:37:21]
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Re: Memory of a Liar
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by Phantomdream on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:19:24 PM AEST
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| short sweet and to the point. |
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Re: Memory of a Liar
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by Crimson_Valley on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:55:50 PM AEST
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| Wow this is such a good poem! I love it! I love your choice words and your organization, I can't wait to read more of your poems. |
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Re: Memory of a Liar
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by TaintedOptomist on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:21:09 PM AEST
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| if it means anything it was my greaest downfall. i placed your heart above my own. then again you can't expect to hold a narcisitic restless adolesent. i'll appaulogize a million times over but thoughts of the past leave a bad taste in our mouths. in the end maybe it'll play out, it's not knowing that makes acid boil in my stomach. |
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