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Mira, mirror...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 05:53:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Mira, mirror...
Gaze upon the Hispanic beauty that stands before you...
Liquid amber eyes,
Sweet caramel skin,
Long dark tresses,
Curves in all the right places...
Mira, mirror...
Turn your jealous eyes,
And marvel on my splendor...
See how the roses whiten as I pass by?
See how I shine?
The beauty within is the most glamorous of all...
Mira, mirror...
I am not like the others,
Who want to be a clone of the Perfect American Image...
I am natural,
Loving this image that smiles back at me...
So, mira mirror...
Take a good hard look,
At the elegant rose that is staring back....
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-02-07 17:53:39]
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Re: Mira, mirror...
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 06:09:53 PM AEST
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It's me, It's me..LOL.. (I'm waking up now.. great write..
I never wanted to look Spanish..I'm happy with my flaming red hair and flashing green eyes..stubby short body..wrinkled, freckled flesh..and the computer that is disappearing before my eyes..really.. everything seems to be fading away.. maybe its I.E.. |
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Re: Mira, mirror...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 06:10:40 PM AEST
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"See how the roses whiten as I pass by?"
This burns my mind in its clarity.
FleurdeSang, thanks for writing this. |
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Re: Mira, mirror...
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by Phantomdream on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:11:53 PM AEST
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| This was sweet...and full of thought. |
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Re: Mira, mirror...
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:38:14 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful.
Scott |
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Re: Mira, mirror...
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:00:58 PM AEST
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I do not believe the mirror needs to be convinced, as it has seen you all along. But the image in the mirror needs to be as equally forcefull in reminding you ... of these words, these phrases, this attitude, this feeling and your beauty. And you should never be alowed to doubt or forget again.
Nazmythian ~ |
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