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Haiku
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
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Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:46:15 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Lost in the soft breeze
Melodies unheard....afar
Fading before dawn.
Copyright ©
Wesley_Dale_Willis
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2005-02-07 20:46:15]
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Re: Haiku
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by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:04:47 PM AEST
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| I love how you write |
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Re: Haiku
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:00:13 PM AEST
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You are getting very good at this, Wes... Well done..
Jenni |
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Re: Haiku
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:56:20 PM AEST
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| i like this haiku very much. perfection was written with this one. =] something about this one makes it better than many that ive read before. makes it better. |
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Re: Haiku
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by nanonan on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 07:51:50 AM AEST
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| I feel like I am a child again, for some reason. The first line makes me feel like I am at the beach, or rather, staning in the ocean. The second line provoked a sound. The ocean waves. That alone to me is a melody of magic that can only be heard if you listen hard enough. And the third line places me there in the evening. I can see the sunset. It's calm warmth, and the soothing tenderness is brings. I think this was written very well, and I would like to read more like this... |
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