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....And then our eyes met
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have my mind organized
and no one's going to change that now,
But it seems that everytime I look
there's some humble girl whispering "wow."
"Nothing is going to distract me"
that is how my mind was set,
But I looked around for someone
....and then our eyes met.
I began to talk to her
and we became new friends,
It seemed like we were a couple
but there were no beginnings or ends.
Sure, we flirted a little
but then, I was caught in the "net,"
I never thought it would happen
....and then our eyes met.
I now want to ask her out
but thats a friendship risk,
I don't want to hurt her
but I want to let her know I exist.
We say "I love you" in notes
but I can make a bet,
That I don't plan on saying it aloud
....and then our eyes met.
Sorry for it being so long....I am a (soon to be famous) poet and
musician, and I plan on playing the music and letting someone else
sing it. Well, Gotta Fly, Ja Ne.
Copyright ©
Sonibe
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2002-12-10 11:30:00]
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Re: ....And then our eyes met
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 12:15:05 PM AEST
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| i've read and wrote plenty longer, don't worry about it. as for the write, it's beautiful imagery of finding into the heart of someone else... absolutely lovely. kudos! ;0) |
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Re: ....And then our eyes met
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by Sonibe on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 08:35:01 PM AEST
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| OOPS! I sent that poem to a Yahoo Group and wanted them to translate it into Japanese....that last paragraph wasn't supposed to be on there....sorry |
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