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Dreamweaver's Garden
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:24:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In this empty room
A perished fire still can burn
I sit and still play this lovely tune
To rise above this harmful burden
We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far
We run away from this darker side
Still hoping the morning will shine
Golden rays unwind a story
As I lay in the dreamweavers garden of fantasy
We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far
Keep me here in this flowers field
Where the worlds rivers wont flow on me
O dreamweaver hold me in your tears
I cant live forever in your false tales of reverie
We play our songs ever so sweetly
Yet the monster of the past will not sleep
Ensnared in the shadows of the moon
I dream near a life of warmth one step too far
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Soulless
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Re: Dreamweaver's Garden
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:53:24 AM AEST
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Nice write...
emotional, sincere.
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Re: Dreamweaver's Garden
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:54:59 PM AEST
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Somehow I missed this... but i absolutely
loved this Brooke it is so beautifully and
poignantly written. So deep and yeah I just
loved this. I hope to see more from you soon.
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Re: Dreamweaver's Garden
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by Rose on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 11:49:35 AM AEST
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WEll written so soft and demure of this write. to have an escape of fantasy is to have a reality. Beautiful.
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