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Hall Of Mirrors
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:54:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I stand in this mirrored hall,
Feeling alone & very small,
I wander past all the glass pictures,
I am in every one I am their fixture.
In every one I am distorted,
My name by the devil is retorted,
I try to step through the glass,
As I do all around me the mirrors fall & smash.
They lay in shards all over the ground,
I wish there was somebody else around,
As I try to pick up the pieces,
I cut my finger & blood releases.
I watch & as I do I become entranced,
Down my skin the red rivers dance,
My cries echo in this secluded room,
I dont dare turn & face my doom.
I am surrounded by pieces of me,
That have broken off & have gotten free,
My tears are the only friend thats stood by,
As I pick myself up from my lips escapes a deep sigh.
Like my insides the glass has shattered,
To the world I feel like Ive never mattered,
Im just another girl who has no reflection,
Whos scared of suffering yet another rejection.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-08 07:54:20]
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by DeathChild on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:59:22 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Gotta say I admire poets who can rhyme |
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:00:11 AM AEST
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emotional write...but what I see is someone who shines bright
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by craz2 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:23:42 AM AEST
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| another good one pixie. I also fell shattered with you. hang in there I know are days must get better. a |
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:27:00 AM AEST
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I always keep the pieces of my heart numbered, for just such an emergency ;o)
beautifully written my friend
Roses
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:41:03 AM AEST
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*Sighs*
What a sad sad sad write, i sometimes feel like this too. Love the rymes as well writen perfectly like always.
*Hugs you Tons*
Jane x |
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:52:45 AM AEST
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Ugh! You have put these feelings to life with your words. I have been there, and I hope to never go back. An excellent write. You have portrayed this so well.
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by Evilnn on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:58:48 AM AEST
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WOW!!!
Pixie, this is an amazing poem-It went right to my heart and soul.
You are not alone, alot of us feel the same way-Shattered from the past and present!!
Beautiful write
Eve
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:01:40 AM AEST
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You always amaze me with your writes.. They are so so full of emotion...
Hugs
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 01:29:47 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this one too Pixie ... I think rejection is a fear harboured by more people than would admit it. It is also a very relateable feeling. You did fabulous at portraying yourself here.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 02:17:44 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful
thee emotional torture of this flow captuivates me
The Wind.... |
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:21:12 PM AEST
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awww sad poem, no rejection here, your poetry matters, and so do u . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:05:05 PM AEST
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You matter and so does your poetry. I don't really know you but so far I have read several of your poems and they are awesome. I hope things get better for you.
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:40:28 AM AEST
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| Full on and deep poem, so many emotions embued into this write, excellent poem. |
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Re: Hall Of Mirrors
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by Kazzy1231 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:10:29 PM AEST
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| Nice write,I often feel like that 2 I have been feeling like that a lot lately.Feel free 2 PM me. |
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