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The Bathroom Stall
Contributed by
SeptChill
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:22:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The Bathroom Stall
By Katherine Faigen
Take away my pain
Is carved with a knife
into the walls
Of the bathroom stalls
"GIrls," I mutter
"Get a life"
Writing your problems here
Wont help you at all
I looked at the door
Where someone had the urge
To explain that it was
In this toilet they purged
Math class sucks
Brigitte's a whore
I hate Sarah Summers
I've nothing to live for
I scratched out a line
About Annie O'Brian
Someone had written
That she "Did" Mr. Ryan
With disgust and some anger
I surveyed the scene
What provoked the angsty teen
To write obscenties as they relieved?
To those that decide
In some state of despair
To display your pain on the john
I didn't need that share
If you have a problem
Talk to a friend
STOP THE STUPID GRAFITTI!
The end!
Copyright ©
SeptChill
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2005-02-08 15:22:38]
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Re: The Bathroom Stall
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by noone on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:28:05 PM AEST
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This is really good. Grafitti is becoming a bigger problem each day. Overall it was written nicely, and i like the sum up at the end.
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Re: The Bathroom Stall
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by Taurusgem1 on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 04:35:42 PM AEST
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| It was touching and made me laugh a little. Good job |
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Re: The Bathroom Stall
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by B-Randy on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 06:24:37 PM AEST
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| I loved your poem. It brought me and my friend to tears. Very witty and clever. ;) |
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