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Excruciating
Contributed by
VixenGirl7
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:50:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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True love doesnt make you bleed,
Till theres no blood gone,
True love doesnt lie,
From dusk to dawn.
Soul mates are meant to stay
Forever by your side
Together to run your lives
Until the day you both die.
Love shouldnt be painful,
But with you Im raw ,
Body Sliced to the bone
And still Im in awe
You still seem to captivate me
Keep me wanting more,
But my lungs are on their last breath
As you beat me to the floor
Lying in a all familiar puddle,
Of my own warm blood
Practically drowning
In the silent crimson flood.
To hurt to run,
To scared to scream,
Our love seems so far away
As if I were in a dream
Your mood is like the weather
Changing everyday,
Hoping your anger was just a phase
I kneel and begining to pray
Father help me as I fear Im dying.
Broken bones, and make-up covered bruises.
Can our love coincide and comfort the pain?
Because honestly father, Im sick of making excuses.
Copyright ©
VixenGirl7
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2005-02-08 20:50:45]
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Re: Excruciating
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:27:31 PM AEST
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This poem really touched me! I LOVED IT!!
You could have made it more vivid and alive with better details. I loved the line " Make-up covered bruises". Great Write. Keep em coming.
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Re: Excruciating
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by NightOwl on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:47:40 PM AEST
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Lying in a all familiar puddle,
Of my own warm blood
Practically drowning
In the silent crimson flood
The emotions are so strong! Excellent, amazing, breathtaking poem!
Keep the faith! God Bless.
*~Erin~* |
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