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Presence
Contributed by
Somario
on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:05:51 PM in AEST
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I hardly know you
Youre only but an acquaintance
And for only a few short moments we converse
Yet within those moments
Youve made me laugh
Youve made me cry
Twisting my emotions
And entangling them in my mind
I can no longer understand what I feel
But I know that what youve left in me
Is more than what Ive felt before
And when I try to push it out
It just wont leave
Even as months pass by
Still this feeling wont diminish
As much as I try to let you go I cant
Until I am broken inside
And the pain youve caused me becomes more than I can bear
And finally I let you slip away
Letting go of what I once held so dear
Copyright ©
Somario
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2005-02-08 22:05:51]
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Re: Presence
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:34:36 PM AEST
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This is really awesome!! I can identify with it so much. It is truly hard to let go..
Welcome to YPDC..Hope to see lots more of your work here..
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Re: Presence
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:23:38 PM AEST
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What a fabulous first post, Somario. I like this a lot. It tugs at me... and reminds me - just how powerful a moment can be. *sigh*
Welcome to YPDC, Somario!!
Nicely done!
~SNM~
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Re: Presence
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:46:58 PM AEST
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Great poem. Most moment people try to forget... they erase bad memories from their mind... if you know what I mean. This poem would bring them back, which reflects how great it is...
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