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Anxiety Attack
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:30:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Looking
diagonally
down
Avoiding
your eyes
My own
darting
fixating temporarily, adamantly,
shuttering,
shaking,
quaking
jumping
shifting
avoiding all contact
at all costs
til one corner of my eye
catches contact with yours, slightly contaminated now
lack of courage, lack of strength, lack of will to go on
full of shame, and frustration, and of, Im insecure
such a baby, crying weeping, breaking sleeping, cut it out
crime please punish, so stupid, so weak, so repugnant, so frustrating, its a snowball
LUMP IN THE THROAT, SWIMMING IN TEARS, GROWING FEARS, LUMP IN THE THROAT, LUMP IN THE THROAT, LUMP IN THE THROAT, LUMP IN THE THROAT GETTING BIGGER, GETTING BIGGER, GETTING BIGGER
Breathe in, let it go, it shakes, let it go, breath still shaky, breathe it out,
DONT MAKE A LUMP AGAIN, DONT LOOK-SEE HIS EYES AGAIN, DONT LET THAT LUMP BACK IN
BREATHE!!!!!
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2005-02-08 22:30:48]
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Re: Anxiety Attack
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:34:56 PM AEST
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I tried to do some HTML to align it diffrently, but it didn't work... it's no big deal, I just wrote it in more of an aesthetic/visual artful format... if you really need to see it, pm me.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Anxiety Attack
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:20:34 AM AEST
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| Great description of an anxiety attack. I too suffer from them. If you ever want to chat pm me. Much peace to you sister. |
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Re: Anxiety Attack
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:34:26 AM AEST
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I wish I didn't know how you feel...that I couldn't relate. (heartfelt tears right now). Wonderful, Chelsea, wonderfully sad.
~Carrie~
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Re: Anxiety Attack
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 07:45:19 PM AEST
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It looks like you wrote this awhile ago, but I did a search of "anxiety attack" and your poem came up. I can relate. Anxiety attacks kick my ass. If you're bored, feel free to check me out at:
http://www.myspace.com/kellymagovern
I am down with creative folks. Late. |
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