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Things Will Never be the Same
Contributed by
Curtisc
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:38:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I hope you're doing fine out wherever you are,
I'm not doing so good here without you.
Still can't believe you moved so far,
can't believe whats happened is true.
Without you around my heart's so confused,
it's stuck on you with nowhere to turn.
Maybe it's worn out from being overused?
Or maybe it's waiting for you to return?
I'll never really know the answer to this,
and the pain will eventually fade.
I'd give anything for one last kiss,
but most of all I wish you would've stayed.
The life without you is too different for me,
why did this have to occur?
I wish this wasn't how things had to be,
never again will they be how they were.
I only hope that someday we'll reunite,
and then I will know we were meant to be.
This is something I dream about every night,
because you've locked my heart and stolen the key.
Copyright ©
Curtisc
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2005-02-08 22:38:49]
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Re: Things Will Never be the Same
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by breny on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 12:33:19 AM AEST
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this poem is very good and completely filled with emotion.
i know these feelings very well and you expressed them wonderfully.
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Re: Things Will Never be the Same
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:18:12 AM AEST
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awwww this is a tear jerker so honest and touching. I feel your distance will only be a temporary thing you will be back in touch
Michelle |
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Re: Things Will Never be the Same
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:40:13 AM AEST
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Touching write, Hope things get better for you.
Jenni |
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Re: Things Will Never be the Same
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 03:32:47 PM AEST
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a sad poem, well written though, yes the pain will eventually fade, even love is subordinant 2 life as time will eventualy win out, as u wonder where the pain went wondering y it doesn't seem 2 hurt as much anymore, and is it wrong 2 feel that way . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Things Will Never be the Same
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:13:49 AM AEST
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this is a lovely poem i really like it
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Re: Things Will Never be the Same
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:10:08 PM AEST
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| Aww Sweet write...I really liked the last stanza. |
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