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don't have a title
Contributed by
o7neves
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Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 11:59:44 PM in AEST
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When I first saw you, I saw your beautiful blue eyes
But didnt look any deeper, because I figured you had ties
We exchanged a few words, but with no such flirting
By the end of the night I was crying, so didnt even think about courting
After that night you, werent even a thought in my mind
Up until two weeks later, when I saw you for the second time
I reconsidered the idea of flirting
Especially once you caught me smirking
I wasnt aware, of the effect you had on me
But you knew it all too well, cuz you wouldnt let me be
So you finally introduced yourself and shook my hand
Now that I think about it a date with you is something I want to land
Copyright ©
o7neves
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2005-02-08 23:59:44]
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Re: don't have a title
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 03:16:30 PM AEST
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verry honest and open, cute poem, hey, u never know . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: don't have a title
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:07:54 AM AEST
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| This is a cute write. I enjoyed it. I can relate :-) |
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Re: don't have a title
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:17:51 PM AEST
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This is so sweet.
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Re: don't have a title
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:16:25 AM AEST
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great job again tanya!! I know this was awhile ago so how did things ever turn out with this guy?? with as much as we talk there's still some things i still don't know :) keep em comin...
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