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Let Your Spirit Live On
Contributed by
SheDevil13317
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:43:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears began to rush,
As the call out that you were dead,
Death by a rope,
Hanging by the bed.
Although, aquitences were we not,
You've touched so many souls,
The fire you seemed to thought have burned out,
Seems to flow stronger than before.
My eyes seemed to wonder,
To the clouded sky above,
Wondering if you see us all,
And our dedication to you.
Uneasy feelings drift,
Emotions seemed untrue,
If only we could have comforted you,
Death be there still?
What's done is done,
Nothing more to say,
But so much more to do,
I'll regard your life,
And others' life,
With in my heart,
Upon the internet too,
Spread your name,
Hence regrets be broken.
My mind and eyes seemed to soften,
As my thoughts began,
J-Storms is living,
Bright and True.
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SheDevil13317
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2005-02-09 10:43:44]
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Re: Let Your Spirit Live On
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by Twisterchaser on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:59:52 AM AEST
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| A life is never gone as long as it lives in memory. a memory to each is diffrent. a good write |
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Re: Let Your Spirit Live On
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by nascarfive on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 04:57:11 PM AEST
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| maybe had he known so many people cared..he wouldn't have taken his life..I wonder why he didn't know..In any case..nice job. |
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