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Past Fireplaces
Contributed by
_myonlyone_
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 05:57:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The fireplace ignites your eyes
As we talk there on the couch
You tell me of your dreams
And I tell you of mine;
Surprisingly enough,
We are in both.
Your kiss explores my face
And behind closed eyes
I melt into your warmth
And the saftey of your arms.
Storms of my thoughts;
Remembrances,
All ignorant of time.
"And," he stated,
"With this ring, I thee wed."
And now this golden memory is
Perched upon my finger.
Years later
We sit across the breakfast table
With our every-day wall
Of newsprint between us.
Our thoughts are our own;
Sharing them is something we
Haven't done in years.
But occasionally I still wonder
If the smoldering embers of the fireplace
Will ever again ignite your eyes.
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_myonlyone_
... [
2005-02-09 17:57:11]
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Re: Past Fireplaces
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:00:16 PM AEST
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| You've so caught the spirit of what (we) are trying to avoid. Sad but beautiful write. Blessings. |
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Re: Past Fireplaces
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by waos on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:16:29 PM AEST
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Nice! The second stanza to me seemed the weakest but I see why
you have it. The way you tied in the beginning at the end was masterful.
Nice job!! This was so good - and something to always keep in mind
in relationships.
~waos/kara |
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Re: Past Fireplaces
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by cherrycoke on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:19:21 PM AEST
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| that was amazing!! it always feels good to read an idea that no one has explored before .. your writing is definitely not the "same old-same old" stuff i read alot .. wow, and you thought i had talent?? good job! |
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