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Reflection
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:27:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Sitting here Sakura petals fall around me And land in the dark water I watch them float away Haunting blue eyes stare up at me From a pale face, lit by the moon Long raven tresses fall infront of my face and my look-alike friend She stares at me with pain from her past Reflected in her sad eyes They tell a long story of hurt and betrayl A lone tear falls from her face and mine The water ripples as a fish swims by Her image scatteres slightly As I stare down at this girl Laying in the water I feel my mask wane Silent tears flow from the eyes of the girl in the water We reach up and touch our cheek The salty liquid is warm on my fingers My mask has forever been broken As I look back at the girl, I have to glance again I do not see a girl anymore I see a woman Hardened by the years A woman that survived her past Me
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Re: Reflection
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:49:14 PM AEST (User
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hauntingly beautiful
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Re: Reflection
(User Rating: 1 ) by only4das on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:57:45 AM AEST (User
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Sometimes we don't have to see our reflection we already know the hurt has taken on years....great poem...beautifully written...
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