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Spiteful Malcontent
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:38:00 PM in AEST
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Spiteful Malcontent
Anger reflects
Burning through
Your soul
Your coldness
Freezes the black fire
In fixated hatred
Love melts nothing
Temperature is stagnant
As mercury dries up
Anger burned
And hatred flared
But your coldness
Leaves fire impaired
And the sparks
Disintegrate in thin air
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2005-02-09 19:38:00]
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Re: Spiteful Malcontent
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:39:13 PM AEST
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You think I delude myself kitten..No you are as great as I think you are...Amazing poem as always..Do these others think they can do better?
I doubt they could fill your lunch box. |
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Re: Spiteful Malcontent
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:53:36 PM AEST
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intense you have a flair I cant describe I love it
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Re: Spiteful Malcontent
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:06:01 PM AEST
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Another great poem Jinnifer
You always write the best
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Re: Spiteful Malcontent
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by UnlovedChild on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:41:48 PM AEST
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| This was an amazing write , forget the hate, feel the love. lol. Great expression. |
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Re: Spiteful Malcontent
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 11:25:56 PM AEST
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| Thanks for the comment...I liked this poem alot there was depth in it in not so many words...you didnt need alot of words...great job keep writing |
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