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Hurt Of Bliss
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:57:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Life's little gift
To hurt me
At any risk
Lie's great lift
Healing my hurt
Unclenching my fist
Truth's little sift
Always hurting me
Making me *****
Death's great dif.
Ending my hurt
Forgetting what I've
Missed
....
My life's best gift
Death
No more risk
Nothing
Left...
Taking my life
With the
Hurt
Of Bliss
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-09 21:57:28]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hurt Of Bliss
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by heartbroken4ever on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:00:47 PM AEST
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Clark you can't leave me either
I would cry so much and I'd miss
you so much too.
Always
Amber |
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Re: Hurt Of Bliss
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:45:54 PM AEST
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| Amazing and visual post..You know what I love about most poets here..Is they are not poets..They are blue collar high school no college with no real bravado..However you are not one of those. |
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Re: Hurt Of Bliss
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:21:53 PM AEST
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| i agree with ms amber and patrick on this one. i liked the hurt of bliss, very creative indeed. you have more creative brain cells than most of the poeple on this site have of total brain cells. though im sorry to say, that still isnt saying much. ::evil grin:: |
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Re: Hurt Of Bliss
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by aprilrose on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 02:30:13 AM AEST
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| i liked the poem full of strong emotions it is good |
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