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Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:19:45 AM in AEST
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All my feelings spill out on a page
my love, sadness, heartache, and rage
I explain about my life, or maybe my dreams
or how the world is falling apart at the seams
I tell about how my life has gone by
I ask about questions that I still wonder why
I write from mistakes I suffered in the past
and about relationships that just didn't last
I write about friends and how they have helped
I talk about fate and the cards i've been dealt
i've also put family in some of them too
but some are real bad from my point of view
So as I write about the good and the bad
the things i've accomplished or what makes me mad
I will never foresake the poems i've wrote
because they've made life easier to cope
Copyright ©
Dragontear27
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Re: Poems
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by aprilrose on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:33:19 AM AEST
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| i love this poem it is very well written |
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Re: Poems
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:34:47 AM AEST
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Such heartfelt and true words, I write to keep the pain at bay, and insanities away.
Loved the way this flowed as your poured your heart and soul into this beautifully written poem, excellent work. |
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:36:10 AM AEST
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| oh ..this is an awsome write! i love this....brilliant |
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Re: Poems
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 02:04:49 AM AEST
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| Brutally honest. Well done. |
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Re: Poems
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 02:31:39 AM AEST
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You did good. Your poem says it all.
J~ |
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Re: Poems
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 03:23:22 AM AEST
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this is a great write it truly comes from the heart
good job
catz77 |
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Re: Poems
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by pixie on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:04:45 PM AEST
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writing is a good release of pent up feelings and emotions, you expressed that well here
pix xx |
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Re: Poems
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by AngelEmmA on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 11:47:43 PM AEST
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| It's amazing hun keep it up |
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Re: Poems
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 10:26:35 PM AEST
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| (cries with you..writes with you..reads your writing..and says..I'm glad ..and I love your user name.. |
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