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Your Beauty Defined
Contributed by
mina-1
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:59:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The smile that adorns from your lips
Leaves the red rose shaming
its mornings dew drops
Your beauty defines your elegance
Making your blue eyes dazzle in mid dance
Your figure so stunning, your skin so fair
Leaving the moon's beauty with yours, cannot compare
Your sheer grace as you stand so significantly tall
Would send any man crazy, insane and up the wall
The words you speak so softly
Keep men in a trance
Waiting in queue to have the next dance
When you enter the room
Your presence is felt
Every head turns as burning desires swelter
You're the envy of every woman in the room
As your beauty is enchanting like an orchid in full bloom
As the tongues are left wagging there is only one lucky man
Who has you wearing his ring and under his command
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mina-1
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2005-02-10 05:59:58]
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Re: Your Beauty Defined
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by Kachina on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 10:37:06 AM AEST
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| I love it! Very well written. |
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Re: Your Beauty Defined
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 09:31:46 PM AEST
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This has the divinity of a prayer, the poetic
charm and artistry of one who has envisioned
the souls of the angels them selves . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Your Beauty Defined
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:19:09 AM AEST
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| I love it Great write |
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