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When Minutes Seem Like Hours
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:53:02 AM in AEST
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When minutes seem like hours,
Love is a sad & beautiful flower,
You wait to hear their voice on the phone,
Without their presence you feel all alone.
Everything reminds your wilting heart,
That you & your love are now apart,
You sit there yearning & waiting,
You lay silent anticipating.
Clock seems to go back in time,
Here I wait wanting you to be mine,
I wish you would burst through that door,
As you did all those times before.
I know that one day when you leave,
You wont come back & I will grieve,
Trapped inside a bubble of despair,
Feeling the pain of you not being there.
I let out a sigh as I think about you,
Think about how in my life you once flew,
Without no hint & no pleasant warning,
My love deepens with each days new dawning.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-10 11:53:02]
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Re: When Minutes Seem Like Hours
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by zaknafein8891 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:01:08 PM AEST
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| great work. I like the whole sad love theme. |
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Re: When Minutes Seem Like Hours
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:53:17 PM AEST
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| yeah..sometimes it seems like the hands on the clock are giving us the finger don't it.. nice write my pixilator..we have to get a costume for that super hero,,THE PIXILATOR..lol |
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Re: When Minutes Seem Like Hours
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 02:46:50 PM AEST
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Can relate to some of this Pixie.
An excellent poem written so well
love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: When Minutes Seem Like Hours
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 03:41:03 PM AEST
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2 call this a poem takes on the connotation
of composition day in elementary school, u
know, " what i did on my summer vacation "
this is simply another one of your beautiful
writtings, filled with hope and longing and
most of all, the loving side of your creativeity
that only one as gifted as u, could produce . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: When Minutes Seem Like Hours
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 04:20:04 PM AEST
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Oh Krissie, this is beautiful, and so sad.
I adore it.
Especially these lines:
Everything reminds your wilting heart,
That you & your love are now apart,
You sit there yearning & waiting,
You lay silent anticipating.
Absolutley beautiful.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: When Minutes Seem Like Hours
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by Dri on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:42:58 PM AEST
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| i know how it is to really miss some one... this is an incredible poem. |
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Re: When Minutes Seem Like Hours
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:33:17 PM AEST
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You write your emotions out so well Pixie. I envy that at times, mine just don't come out that easily, that freely ... I gotta dig 'em up and then try and decipher what the heck they mean.
Nazzy ~ |
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