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Unloved Ones
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:05:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've learned
Not to trust
But I've begun
To trust you
You're the only
One left
Out of my broken
Little few
You make me
Happy
Everybody else
Makes me
Angry and blue
I've always been
A loner
And a loner
You've always
Been too
Now I've met
One like me
One that accepts
Me for me
Thank you
For being you
And....
Another broken one..
Open one..
Misguided
Misunderstood
Unfortunate
One
Us together
We are...
"The Unloved Ones"
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-10 18:05:11]
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Re: Unloved Ones
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by heartbroken4ever on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:13:45 PM AEST
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Clark I love this poem
It is awesome so what made
you write it and who is it about
always
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Re: Unloved Ones
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:18:33 PM AEST
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| very nice write. |
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Re: Unloved Ones
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:21:37 PM AEST
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| Good feeling here..Remember this..Your young but what you have that maybe only one or two others your age have is talent..PPl here half your age and twice it,,have no idea that their bravado is an attempt at talent. |
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Re: Unloved Ones
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:02:20 PM AEST
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| this is an amazing poem, one that I can relate to well. Nicly done |
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Re: Unloved Ones
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 10:39:11 PM AEST
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| clark, you outdid yourself in this one. =] i too can relate with orphy. =] i want to select just a stanza of this that stood out to me, but i cant. this entire poem jumped out. |
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Re: Unloved Ones
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:55:22 PM AEST
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This is wonderful I wish I could find an unloved one like me too. Be glad you did. This was another fantastic poem. Great write clark.
--amanda-- |
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