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Inner Battle
Contributed by
evilcherry312
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:12:26 PM in AEST
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The bitter battle is raging. Standing in Limbo, I fight to clear
the incessant fog from before my eyes. Both sides gripping
my hands, tempting me to turn ever so slightly to either
side.
Glancing to my right, the side I know I want. Slightly touching
my fingertips, but has the strongest force of all. Beckoning
to me with the sweet voice of eternity; I long to join.
His soothing song envelopes me and I am enthralled
with him. It is I who is reaching for him so strongly,
and I see him reaching, too, crying for me to break free from
my captivity. My lust is overwhelming.
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Re: Inner Battle
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:20:11 PM AEST
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Want my superb advice..This is no work in prgress..It is done and done very well..This is a great write..I have read others by you but by far this stands up and kicks me in the balls..Very good write..
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Re: Inner Battle
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:51:43 AM AEST
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| Sad yet emotional, excellent poem |
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Re: Inner Battle
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:13:19 PM AEST
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It's good...it just needs a little more detail...explaining why your in captivity...why can't you touch...
good work in progress |
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