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You Can't Fool Me
Contributed by
HiDdEnTEARS
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Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 10:49:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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OnCe AgAiN... on the other line of the phone
HERE I AM
listening in on your guilty pleasure, your raging anger its seems so. NaTuRaL. if i didn't know you...i would be fooled
JUST. like. EVERYONE. else.
you want me to feel sorry for you? you want my remorse for a casual action?
you want me to believe that after weeks of crying. tears. rolling...
D O W N
my innocent cheeks. because in your eyes it was -MY- fault. but i guess in your eyes isn't everything?
so now you'll hate me forever. --> or so you say.
W. A. I. T
didn't you say that last week?
you want me to care? you want SOMEONE to care?
well don't come to me darling, im SICK of caring.
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HiDdEnTEARS
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2005-02-10 22:49:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You Can't Fool Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kuro_Mirai on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:04:17 PM AEST (User
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Great poem, good job at using different typing skills to express your feelings. |
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Re: You Can't Fool Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by DeathChild on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:12:49 AM AEST (User
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Damn.Excellent work!love the way it was written to.Keep it up.
-Child |
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