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YOU
Contributed by
zeppchic420
on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 10:29:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When I see you playing on your set
your passion envelops me
although not for me,
I fall deeper in love with you
just for your love
of the intangible
it's unable to be touched
yet the way you feel about it
is the same as I do
our love for
the rythms
the beats
and the harmonies
is a common ground for us
yet you turned me away
like a poorly written cadence
we both love music
if only you loved me as well
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zeppchic420
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2002-07-20 22:29:41]
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Re: YOU
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 12:25:36 AM AEST
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I love the style and the pace of this...lovely.
Welcome to YPDC! I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry
Chrissie |
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Re: YOU
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 09:20:41 AM AEST
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| it's so hard to fall in love with someone who doesn't feel the same... especially when there is so much in common. i feel your pain bro... just keep your head up and keep a nug in the bowl and things will always get better. |
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