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in the shadows of my childhood hatred
Contributed by
summers
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:22:55 AM in AEST
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death by negligence.
two setting suns over violated slaves.
the rain will drown them, but the screams will never fade.
ill always remember a dark house and two shadows armed with leather straps,
nail-tipped.
i was beaten until i bled, but i lived.
i lived.
i remember how snowfall brought purity, but i was never pure in his eyes.
to prove his point, he had taken my siblings out,
one by one,
and beat them to their death with that strap.
the fate of my brother, my sister,
will be the same decay that reaches my father.
how deep does blood run?
it runs from the tip of my gun...to the bullet hole between his eyes.
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Re: in the shadows of my childhood hatred
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:28:21 AM AEST
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| Deep intense and vivid poem, excellent reading |
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Re: in the shadows of my childhood hatred
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:45:51 AM AEST
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| wow.. this is so intense... well done |
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