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You sicken me
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone2
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:32:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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what a fool,
what a fool i have been,
look into my eyes,
see again what i have seen,
what a torture,
what a torture i suffered you,
i cant bear to stand on my pride,
i cant defy what my heart did do,
my mouth was so quick,
maybe too harsh for your ear,
but my hatred had theory,
you still heard every word you needed to hear,
you disgust me,
make me sick in my stance,
i cant look at your baby face eyes,
makes me sickened by the glance,
you think you can read me like a book?
but i have no words to read at all,
my hearts inscriptions are not for your eyes,
i trusted you once but you let me fall,
dont look my way,
your'e voice unnerves me,
makes me want to scream in rage,
just leave me alone, set me free,
i want to walk away,
but i want to give you a second chance to forgive,
but now you blow your chance again,
so that is how we have to live,
you revealed my privacy,
spoke like a *****y teen girl but in a male's tone,
now i want to grab my weapns,
crush you like a slug under a stone,
i have the power,
now im going to use it against you,
i'll make sure you never forget,
never forget what i put you through...
J.S.Machen "
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Re: You sicken me
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by Rhymingron on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 04:39:15 PM AEST
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| I'm puzzled. How is this a poem of beauty? |
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Re: You sicken me
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by Psyche on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:18:42 PM AEST
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| hmmm.. maybe a poem about a beauty? That isnt underneath? I'm with you... not quite getting the connection. HOWEVER, the emotion of vengence and disgust is definitely present - and obviously what the author is after. Good write, all the same (though I think you oughta re-categorize) |
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Re: You sicken me
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:52:46 AM AEST
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| your right it isnt a poem on beauty, it's an angry poem xxxxxxxxxxxxxjazzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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