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I am Alone
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:47:07 PM in AEST
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I'm trapped in a world of hate
knowing that death is soon to be my fate
I'm lost without my soul
trying not to lose control
I am torn without ny heart
because they took it out and ripped it apart
I am alone
I'm dead in my dreams
and no one can hear my screams
I've fallen into the dark
and it has left it's mark
I don't know to get out
no one will come that I don't doubt
I am alone
I try to find the light
not willing to give up the fight
I know I can make it some how
and I'm going to do it now
Wait who will be wating for me
no one as it always seems to be
I am alone
So I stand here on the edge
knowing I'm about to leap of this edge
I'm taking it all
and making the fall
Now I'm gone
and I don't know why I waited so long
Because.....
i am still alone
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Re: I am Alone
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:52:50 PM AEST
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"I don't know to get out
no one will come that I don't doubt"
Ok then who Am I....... ? :)
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Re: I am Alone
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by DesolantDreamer on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:52:55 PM AEST
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Wow...heart-wrenching pain emits from every line. I know the pain in this poem VERY well but could never express it like this. Wow...words can't discribe the beauty and pain in this poem. Wow.
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You say you read me like an open book. But the pages are torn and frayed.
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Re: I am Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:03:34 PM AEST
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| good poem amber. im very impressed. |
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Re: I am Alone
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by ArseCrust on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:05:55 AM AEST
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| this is a really good poem.and just remember you wont always alone. |
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Re: I am Alone
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:28:01 AM AEST
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| So much sorrow, vividly described emotions and details, excellent poem. |
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