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Serrated with Passion
Contributed by
essentially9
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:00:44 PM in AEST
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Serrated with Passion
The blood drips
Melodically from my skin
As the poison spreads
With venomous pain
Within
The reasons go deeper
Than the blade ever could
But the shallowness
Dulls the serrated edge
Rusted over with tears
Void of all emotions
That were slowly killed
By the deserving guilt
The metal's passion
Is fed with blood
And fulfilled with death
Compensating the sacrifice for it
With what was wanted in the end
But the serrated edge is too dull
From all of the blood that's left it full
With lack of passion
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by UnlovedChild on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:06:11 PM AEST
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| Very powerful, heart-racing poem. A remarkable write. Good job. |
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:29:37 PM AEST
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| Odd poem for me, but you have an imagination...Keep on writing. OK? |
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by Taurusgem1 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:31:23 PM AEST
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| Sad. But Good |
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:48:47 PM AEST
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Very discriptive Jinnifer, Another great write that puts most poems to shame.... :)
Clark |
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by afterdark on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:50:43 PM AEST
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| This is one of the best I have read in a long while..I ***** you not this is pure genius from the start to finish.. |
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by allforyou on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:11:52 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:46:17 AM AEST
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| Wow...amazing write. |
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:54:48 AM AEST
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| So much sorrow, and depth from such powerful and chilling words, excellent poem. |
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Re: Serrated with Passion
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:42:37 AM AEST
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| Deep, Descriptive and powerful. You are truly a wonderful writer. *envies* -Sami- |
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