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Calm spirit
Contributed by
Wesley_Dale_Willis
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:04:07 PM in AEST
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Just before the dawn
Comes calmness of the spirit
Then life marches on.
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2005-02-11 21:04:07]
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Re: Calm spirit
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:13:34 PM AEST
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| i liked this one. i must say it was because of the rhyme like sound of the first and third line. |
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Re: Calm spirit
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by wakegurl77 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:19:35 PM AEST
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i like this its like the feeling of beauty you have when you wake up but then you realise it wont last becaue the rest of the day is stress
Great Write
Leana |
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