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Dark Illusion
Contributed by
Evilnn
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here she sits all alone
Trying to find a place called home
Cold chills down to the bone
Evil & darkness have come to prevail
Leaving her hopeless
Again she has failed
There are the demons
Gathering beside her
Surrounding,Smothering
And now they're inside her
Copyright ©
Evilnn
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2005-02-11 22:55:26]
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Re: Dark Illusion
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by Evilnn on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 12:25:59 AM AEST
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I am truely feeling as thoug I am looseing my baltle to survive.
I'm so tired
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Re: Dark Illusion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:25:12 AM AEST
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| Wow this is a very emotinoal write. Great poem. |
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Re: Dark Illusion
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:42:53 AM AEST
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I know sometimes ur so tired and u feel that u can't go on. Hang in there for things shall get better.
U fail , u try again and again.
On this site u r not alone, if u need a friend or someone to talk 2 message me ok |
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Re: Dark Illusion
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 08:41:17 AM AEST
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Well written and obviously heartfelt. I'll have to read more of your stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: Dark Illusion
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:53:43 AM AEST
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| Deep dark and freaky, yet gripping from begining to conclusion, excellent poem. |
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