|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Death in a Teacup
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:50:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Death in a teacup
I just can't wait
To see all the things
You have on your plate
Mind spinning wild
Knowledge knows naught
I thought you abandoned
That fool of a thought
Smart in your own rite
You spin like a top
Like any child's toy
Don't know when to stop
Keep raging onward
And send me a card
I'll keep you posted
The State of the Yard
Blaze like a spark
Don't let them bind
You to a single thing
And cherish your mind
Hold to all vision
You can grasp close
Don't let them choke it
In some measured dose
Come by tomorrow
Or whenever you can
We will drink and ponder
That old practiced plan.
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
... [
2005-02-12 03:50:37]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Death in a Teacup
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:39:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Deep and awesome write, excellently written verses and flowing in style. |
|
|
Re: Death in a Teacup
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:16:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Interesting . . . |
|
|
Re: Death in a Teacup
(User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:04:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Awesome. I love the conversational feeling. I get a great sense of the type of relationship going on here and I love it. You've packed so much into this and made it resound with friendship and old, long-lived companionship. I'm so glad you're able to write about it-- and so extremely well too. Refreshing
Bravo!
Lots of love and peace be with you.
Chelsea |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
