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Yours Forever
Contributed by
MrWrite
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:17:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You appeared as if from a dream,
revealing yourself in a way strange to my own eyes,
yet with a look, I felt my heart expand
in a way I did not think possible.
The sky seemed to open,
ushering in a new beginning
to my painful existence.
I never thought something like this
would ever happen to me,
never thought that Id find someone
I could love as much as I love you.
Yet here you are.
When you arent here its like a piece of myself
has been ripped from my body.
Youre like air to me, essential to my survival,
my reason for being.
You give me strength that I never thought I had,
make me believe that I can do anything.
Ill love you till the end of my days,
until time itself ceases to exist.
Im yours forever, love
Forever
Copyright ©
MrWrite
... [
2005-02-12 10:17:50]
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Re: Yours Forever
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:35:17 AM AEST
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| Deep and passionate write, so much love and tenderness flowing withing your words, excellent poem. |
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Re: Yours Forever
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by foxwillow on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:37:33 AM AEST
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| A poem of love and sacrifice, commitment and sharing..evolving.. |
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Re: Yours Forever
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:09:39 AM AEST
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Ah, MrWrite - you have so clearly fallen... and how wonderfully you've captured it on the page. What a beautiful gift to your intended!
Nicely done - keep writing!
~SNM~ |
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