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Dying
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:24:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Inside I am slowly dying,
Cant seem to stop myself from crying,
Even in sleep I do not find my rest,
Horrors of the night leave me feeling stressed.
You said youd rather we were apart,
You drove a steak right into my heart,
Tonight alone I will lie in bed,
Thoughts of you constantly in my head.
Is this really the end of the road?
Has our love gotten stale & old?
Please say it hasnt & we can make it,
As I feel so weak & tired of feeling like *****.
No amount of tissues can wipe my tears,
No amount of reassurance can curb my fears,
My soul feels black, heart has no rhythm,
Is this your final heartbreaking decision?
We had everything at one point,
Nothing was separate everything was joint,
Now we feel so far away from each other,
Now we feel like enemies instead of lovers.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-12 14:24:55]
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Re: Dying
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:26:47 PM AEST
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wow pix i aint been around for a while, but you certainly still know how to write 'em!
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Re: Dying
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:32:35 PM AEST
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Ditto, i can 100% relate to this Kriss, you sure do know how to write poems thats close to my heart. Great write.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Dying
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:43:18 PM AEST
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| My pixilator..tell me this is just writing? If not..and you need to talk..you know where I am.. just a PMS away..(just want to make you smile little one..really if you want to talk.. |
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Re: Dying
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:10:43 PM AEST
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A rather poignant piece and yet your poetry always speaks to me somehow. Wonderful poem dear. Hope it's not real life and if it is I feel for you even more. (You can always talk to me if you need it)
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Dying
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:23:10 PM AEST
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| Very good write Pix. |
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Re: Dying
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:45:30 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to this write and you did a terrific job at writing this piece. Excellent work! |
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Re: Dying
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:26:54 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem pixie, as always a true work of art and a joy 2 read . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Dying
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:26:45 PM AEST
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I hope you don't really this way. And if you do, I really hope things get better for you.
Scott |
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