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Yearning for Yellow
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:13:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Floating in my blues and yellows
Too much blue
Could I please get at least a little green?
Nothing seems to go right lately
My heart screams
Will I ever be who I really am?
Good things come and then theyre broken
Bittersweet
I do not like the taste of salty tears
Someday thats what I always say
Its a lie
An empty promise broken on the floor
Spirits locked inside my poor heart
Imprisoned
Can I please have the key to my own soul?
I guess not; for now Im trapped here
Ill just stay
Do you think I could afford to fight me?
No.
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liquidsunshine
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Re: Yearning for Yellow
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by Taurusgem1 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:42:52 PM AEST
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| Pianful poem, Good Write!! |
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Re: Yearning for Yellow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:48:08 PM AEST
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wow! and what a title too.
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Re: Yearning for Yellow
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:08:16 PM AEST
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Gosh hun...
I can tell that things are difficult at the moment, just with those few words.
I think we all go through something akin to this..
Great write hunni...
I really adore the end.. it finished the poem right, I think..
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: Yearning for Yellow
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by sojourner on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:07:41 PM AEST
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good poem,
The true beauty of poetry are the emotions we feel within ,coming to life on paper for all to see and share your feelings for awhile.
sojourner, |
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Re: Yearning for Yellow
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:52:45 PM AEST
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chelsea, this is wonderful. i love it, i love your honesty. there are so many emotions tied to this. the line which stands out to me most is: "Will I ever be who I really am?". Gosh yes, this too could be written about me. Keep up the excellent work.
charlotte xxx |
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Re: Yearning for Yellow
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:40:23 AM AEST
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Trapped---such a simple word, but it means so much. I don't think I quite understand the significance of the colors as much as you probably meant them, but your gut-wrenching honesty is admirable.
~Carrie~ |
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