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be there
Contributed by
unluckicharmz
on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 03:56:20 PM in AEST
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help me catch my breath
when im running out of air
teach me to love life
when things dont seem fair
help me let go of him
when i think things couldnt get worse
teach me to stay calm
when all i want to do is curse
help me smile
when all i want to do is cry
teach me to stay focused
when all i want to do is die
help me to understand
everything you say must be true
teach me to be better
more like you
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Re: be there
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by blackhuntress88 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:16:09 PM AEST
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| i really like it, it's full of emotion. the best kind of poetry. |
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Re: be there
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by thecutter on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:57:20 PM AEST
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nice poem,wanna see more like this! will be lookin out for em. thanks for the comment,feel free 2 email if ya wanna chat
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