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Love in Pain
Contributed by
purecitrus
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:44:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Beneath the hollow tree love arched her desire towards heaven, Her sorrow deliciously frosted by the wind.
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2005-02-13 16:44:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love in Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:29:17 PM AEST (User
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I like the two lines...but I think it would be a whole lot better if there was more.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Love in Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:57:52 AM AEST (User
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You're so descriptive. This is a good write. |
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