|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Hiding in the Closet
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:57:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Composure. He used it to regain his mind, a sense of closure. Weight. A burden on his being, the need to be great overrode his sense of balance, spiraling out of control, he didn't make sense anymore to anyone, so quickly it becomes undone. What is the darkness but a place to hide? Hide from yourself those tears you cry. Through bleary eyes of one who pretends to cry you can see through the lies of honest guys and girls who promise the world for time, but give you nothing but reason to rhyme. Drinking is to depression, as loving is to the question of pleasure over pain, the journey over the destination if he can't partake of any, he's lauded and held up high. He's a straight edge, if he tries to try at life, he's cast out, held at home without the company he wants to be in so he quits it all, to try and begin it all over again. He's a bad man. Does what he can to make the world a worse place. Cast to hell, far from grace, he finds peace in his new disease. Put his mind at ease. Show a flower, a dove, a symbol of love from heaven above, show him salvation without resentation, apology without recindation, save his life, save his soul. What is darkness, but the absence of light? What is my blame, but the change of a name from he to me I begin to see that I'm not hiding from myself in here. I'm hiding from you. My greatest fear.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
... [
2005-02-13 21:57:26] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Hiding in the Closet
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:24:38 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a very insightful peice of writting, deep in it's meaning well written a poetic mural . . .
Dorian Chambers |
|
|
|