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The Things You Say Hurt
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:46:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The things you say to me
Make me hurt inside
What have I done to make you hate me
I have done my best to be good
And not disappoint you
But nothing is good enough obviously
You said that you can't stand me
I hardly ever talk to you
I'm usually locked up in my room
Just to stay away from you
Then all you do is complain because it's all I ever do
When you said today
That I make you sick
I said I make you sick?
And all you said was yes
I felt like crying endlessly
But I couldn't show you the satisfaction you seem to be seeking
I just am confused on what I have done wrong
I will just continue hurting inside
And hide my tears from you
I will just wait until I hear what else I have done to you
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UnlovedChild
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2005-02-13 22:46:41]
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Re: The Things You Say Hurt
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:08:43 PM AEST
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| you have done nothing to her... |
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Re: The Things You Say Hurt
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:20:36 PM AEST
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wounderful work,and you don't make her sick,she only makes herself sick cause she
hates herself and just pointing it at you,so just
ignore it! |
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Re: The Things You Say Hurt
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:19:43 AM AEST
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Hmmm.....Okay so your mother hates you yet you have no Idea why....Well...I sure would'nt want to be her child....She must really hate herself to truly hate you...Overall I enjoyed your poem and you expressed your feelings well
Clark |
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