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Dream
Contributed by
AAChickengirl
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:12:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Dream
In a dream inagination is warped reality.
The plot fluctuates from normality to insanity.
Some even claim to see what happens next,
in humanity.
Dreams allows us to travel in odd places,
and see Deja Vu faces.
The allows us to tie broken laces
and win our once lost races.
In the dark we see the light,
ideas form - some are bright.
We dream of creeping fears,
and most desired wishes.
Confused by hard decisions,
excited by our visions.
Carried through life with hopes and doubts,
we sleep and escape the pressure of shouts.
Dreams, knitted from wild schemes,
are imagination's silent wings.
-Kae
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AAChickengirl
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2005-02-14 09:12:32]
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Re: Dream
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:45:34 PM AEST
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| Isn't that the truth. Sometimes you never want to wake up and others you can't fight your way out fast enough. Great job. |
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Re: Dream
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:18:38 AM AEST
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I like it when my dreams take me places I wanted to go to, but didn't know it yet. Good poem.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Dream
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:00:00 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: Dream
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:00:21 PM AEST
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nice write
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Re: Dream
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by Dkanis on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 03:18:10 PM AEST
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| good poem, but the third line is 2 long |
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Re: Dream
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 01:04:22 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. This was like a didactic lesson on dreams. |
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Re: Dream
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by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 07:09:15 PM AEST
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good poem, I like the way that you wrote it. Good job
Rich |
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Re: Dream
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by January on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 03:44:05 PM AEST
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| Fantastic poem. |
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Re: Dream
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by Sheveg on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 03:31:09 PM AEST
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Wow! Interesting and complicated.
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