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There's More To Life..?
Contributed by
purplestary
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:12:37 AM in AEST
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i've lost my will to live
she said.
well, what happend,
what made you sad?
he said he didn't love me
and then he walked away.
well, thats hardly a reason to die
there's more to life then that.
but that night,
that horrible night!
what about that night?
twenty minutes after he was gone...
i heard the sirens,
i saw the lights!
he left in tears that night
so his vision wasn't right
the driver of the other car,
he was coming from the bar.
so, i've lost my will to live
and tonight begins my end...
well, i don't agree with your decision.
it wasn't your fault, your not to blame!
i never said it was my fault
i just wanna leave
and no words you say
or songs you sing
will change my mind today...
~THE END~
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Re: There's More To Life..?
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by zaknafein8891 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:10:29 PM AEST
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| wow... very emotional. |
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Re: There's More To Life..?
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by Stitch on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:24:49 PM AEST
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There is so much more to life, but God can only show it to those who will open their eyes.
A very sad write, but well said.
Stitch |
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Re: There's More To Life..?
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:44:33 PM AEST
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| This is very unique. It sad with a lot of powerful emotions in this poem. |
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Re: There's More To Life..?
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:01:17 PM AEST
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good poem
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