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Unmasked Valentine
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:43:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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"Unmasked Valentine."
By: Mr. Now Revealed.
Oh, how she doth make my blood burn!
This heart is bursting with emotions,
That I thought had left me long ago,
Weeping of this ruthless ache her words doth bring...
My Dark Lady, thine eyes do drown and entice,
Tears of love spring forth, and I create my own sea...
On this day of love,
I give thee a golden heart with a picture inside...
This locket shall never outshine thine's beauty and radiance,
but let it remind thee of the expressions d'amour that I give...
An ebony rose accompanies,
May it represent thouest undying splendor...
Keep this golden gift close to thy heart,
And I boldly unmask myself,
Whenever you wish to look inside...
Dearest Dark Lady,
I wish thee a love-filled Valentine's Day.
Tu as la cle a mon coeur...
With much adoration,
H.
A/N: Should I keep him? LOL! *Stephy*
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FleurdeSang
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:13:33 PM AEST
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very nice poem, Happy Valentines Day
pix xx |
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:54:36 PM AEST
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sweet poem, a question only u can answer . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:38:14 PM AEST
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| Go gor it! Great work btw. |
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:50:51 PM AEST
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| beautiful absalutely beautiful. |
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:56:01 PM AEST
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| hmmmmmmmm? |
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by zenmind on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:58:36 PM AEST
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lol, this is so cute. If I were you, I would talk to him and see how you guys connect. Just try to have a good conversation. That's how I ususally make my friends. And so maybe, you shouldn't look to get involved "romantically", rather try to be friends and see if it leads to more. Never force anything.
Be True,
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:56:31 PM AEST
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I love the way you put this together so beautiful not to mention adorable! Happy Valentines Day sweet friend
huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by Jonny_Angel on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:39:59 AM AEST
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| Cute poem! I love the use of language in it. Happy Valentine's Day! |
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Re: Unmasked Valentine
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:59:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful and so sweet. Take it slowly nice and easy.
Lots of love sweetangelukxxx |
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