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Valentine for a broken heart
Contributed by
bethie
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I remember, my love ,
how I gave you my heart ,
And gladly,
with no strings attached.
And how you just as gladly
tore it apart ,
And then politely gave it back.
Copyright ©
bethie
... [
2005-02-14 14:13:25]
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Re: Valentine for a broken heart
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:15:55 PM AEST
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very short but so powerfully written,
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Re: Valentine for a broken heart
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by wolfman on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:32:22 PM AEST
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this was very sad, the beaut of it was that you cut rigth to the quick on this one which made it very powerful and hard hitting, I can imagin you weeping as you wrote this with whats let of you taterd heart, just know that it will heal, never full of course, but you will be a better person for it and will love again with more intencity then you though you could, just be strong and keep writng, and remember we are always here if you need us. God bless.
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Re: Valentine for a broken heart
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by sammydid on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:13:42 PM AEST
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horribly beautiful. and by that i mean so sad, yet so wonderful.
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Re: Valentine for a broken heart
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:44:31 PM AEST
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This is pointed, and cuts right to the quick. It is like any valentine verse in its brevity and style, but exposes a side of such relationships that we, in our irresponsibility of living, don't often look at. Well done. I hope you find healing and fulfilment.
Blessings
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Re: Valentine for a broken heart
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by Chilibear on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 03:03:07 PM AEST
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Oh, hun, i'm sorry.....That was so beautifully written. Keep up the good work.
Love always, Chili |
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Re: Valentine for a broken heart
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by Chilibear on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 03:03:53 PM AEST
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Oh, hun, i'm sorry.....That was so beautifully written. Keep up the good work.
Love always, Chili |
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Re: Valentine for a broken heart
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by Djarven on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:07:47 PM AEST
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| Yea, I also remember... U wrote this good... |
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Re: Valentine for a broken heart
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:36:00 PM AEST
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| its short but with a lot of meaning good write |
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