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The Veil Revisited
Contributed by
bethie
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:23:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Through the frosted glass, my eyes peer
But missteps can not be retraced,
No room behind this opaque veneer
But for you, in my heart, there's a space
Sacred vows that we made; disappeared
Perhaps they were carelessly misplaced
The past and our future are both unclear
Like the first and the last pages erased
In a distant dream, you become near
You raise my veil of black lace
Behind my eyes, you find my tears
And through them, I see your face.
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bethie
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2005-02-14 17:23:13]
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Re: The Veil Revisited
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:55:23 PM AEST
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Now this is what The Veil needed. Very well done. I like the language, and the rhyming. Good work.
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