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Final Thoughts
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 06:13:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I've missed so much now
I don't know where I am
I've almost lost them all
There is no light in the place that I'm in
only darkness and constant let-downs
I've drowned myself only to awaken in hell's arms,
where it takes even less than a wound to burn your soul
I'm hiding something from them
Because I went too far this time
I can feel the pain from a simple touch
and the scar will be a constant reminder
Nobody cares about my absence
because there's nothing they can do
and these simple thoughts prevent them from even trying
Perhaps it's best if I go through with my plan,
and phase myself out completely
Because then,
Nobody gets hurt but me
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2005-02-14 18:13:40]
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Re: Final Thoughts
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 06:57:23 PM AEST
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| this was a captivating write. so sad the way common sense just kind of gets them at the end. as long as its not your fate, im happy. great write keep this kinda intelligent poetry coming! |
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