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remembering mom
Contributed by
sojourner
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:17:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Pray tell- what comfort is there in death to thoese left behind to weep In a twilight state I see thee only as in sleep My God! arise so that I may once again, see you smile To hold you once again to feel the warmth,of a mothers touch I loved you oh so much I'm sorry now,for things that I have said and did not say I weep now, within my heart for you have gone away but yet, a smile does come, now and then to brighten my day Remembering! remembering when I was but a little kid and you were my everything for you were my mom
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Re: remembering mom
(User Rating: 1 ) by jmakuer on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:58:49 PM AEST (User
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THAT IS SO SWEET, I COULD RELATE TO THAT, I LOST MY DAD AND I WAS JUST A KID BUT NOW I REGRET BECAUSE I WOULD HAVE BEEN OFF BETTER IF HE WAS HERE.. |
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Re: remembering mom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:44:03 AM AEST (User
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Sweet and heartfelt write. I bet she would have been proud to read it. This poem makes readers appreciate what they have. Great work. |
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Re: remembering mom
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:08:43 AM AEST (User
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It brings me tears..I know how much sorrowful to lose one's own mother..
Few months ago I lost my parents.venkat |
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