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Still in the Yearbook
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:26:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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There he is, staring back at me
The face I've seen a million times
His name still echoing in my head
As his familiar eyes won't let me look away
My brain is bleeding
His face still reflected in my eyes
Devoured in his own high school war
One last defeat left him for the body count
I wonder if he can see my tears
Or feel the chaos behind my eyes
A captured moment when everything was okay
Those eyes have seen what most of us fear
That smile no longer spreads across his face
I'm lost in a moment that no longer exists
Taken away, but where is he now?
One memory... he's still in the yearbook
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2005-02-14 23:26:38]
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Re: Still in the Yearbook
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:41:58 PM AEST
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This is so sad and so very touching.... well written.....
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Jenni |
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Re: Still in the Yearbook
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by jmakuer on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:56:16 PM AEST
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| WELL WRITEN AND I HOPE YOU WILL ALWAYS KEEP IT UP..I BETCHU HE IS STILL LOOKING DOWN UPON YOU |
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Re: Still in the Yearbook
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by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:45:43 AM AEST
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| Great poem, when u get the chance, go back and read one of my poems called "last words". I wrote about looking in my yearbook and seeing the last words my friend left behind before he was killed in a car accident. Im so sorry for your pain. |
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Re: Still in the Yearbook
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:20:23 AM AEST
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Such a sad sad poem, you have writen this so well showing your true inner feelings.
Well done.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Still in the Yearbook
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 12:46:56 AM AEST
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| so powerfully written. |
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Re: Still in the Yearbook
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by dixiegirl on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:08:03 PM AEST
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| that was a great poem. . . it broght i tear to my eyes!! it reminds me of when i look at my best friends picture in the year book!!!! |
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