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why
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
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Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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why didn't she cry wyh didnt he make that noise just like the others why! why!! sobbed to the cadence of moo howl! howl!! never came may be;thy eyes could be tired maybe thy feet would still be lifted high maybe maybe littles ones never sleep on arrival the dawn never duck heated in black and brown the windy cold seize their stay lift! thy hand off thy shoulder old tales are for the marine why why the calabash ought dripped along with the waters the day had gone while the sun remains we're of flesh refusing to becoming one part just a beam, never saw, miles from been a conqueror the tortise left without the shell essence of life watery down the hills.
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Re: why
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 02:34:26 PM AEST (User
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Now see i like poetry like this, the ones that make you think as your reading them and you have to actually go back over them to understand them.....thanks for sharing this one your talent shines through your poetry...
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Re: why
(User Rating: 1 ) by olasunkanmi on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 04:38:33 PM AEST (User
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oreo ur comment always bring joy to my heart
ur my hope, the pole i rest on to forge ahead
thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: why
(User Rating: 1 ) by olasunkanmi on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 04:43:34 PM AEST (User
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oreo ur comment always bring joy to my heart
ur my hope, the pole i rest on to forge ahead
thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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