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Nip & Tuck
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:41:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like a patient of nip & tuck,
Feel just like an old scrap book.
With bits cut out & bits missing,
As if in my soul someone had been fishing.
I feel like I have been altered,
That all my efforts have surely faltered,
I changed to make things alright,
Now I feel parts of me vanish into the night.
A knife has been took to my personality,
My life has become somewhat of a fallacy,
I lay on the surgeons operating table,
Feeling broken & feeling unstable.
I dont feel whole, I feel unfinished,
Whats left of my sanity is diminished,
I am a puppet awaiting the next command,
Just waiting to feel the back of your hand.
The insertions have been cut so deep,
I try to lay still but I cant help but weep,
Why cant you love me for just being myself?
Why must you tamper with my mental health?
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-15 07:41:36]
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Re: Nip & Tuck
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:45:17 AM AEST
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i know i keep saying it pix but you write with such emotion, excellent work.
johnny
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Re: Nip & Tuck
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:51:22 AM AEST
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I agree with Johnny, you do have a way of writing with so much emotion. Another wonderful write Kriss.
Jane xx |
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Re: Nip & Tuck
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:02:57 PM AEST
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I'm going out on a limb here, but it was only when I was most broken that God could put me back together.
Another good poem. You express yourself well.
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Re: Nip & Tuck
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by brew on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 03:49:52 PM AEST
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| wonderful.........you are a talented one. Seems lately i have had writers block......guess its called stress. |
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