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broken for ever.
Contributed by
kitty_girl
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:22:30 PM in AEST
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broken for ever.
my wings are broken,
i can not fly
i can not sprint in to the sky.
i can not stay,
my
cloud
is slowly
wearing away,
until im am come pleetly
gone for ever.
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2005-02-15 12:22:30]
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Re: broken for ever.
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:23:15 PM AEST
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Knowing you're 10, I'm impressed with your creativity. Check your spelling and start using some caps and you're on your way.
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Re: broken for ever.
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by Arsenic on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:07:06 PM AEST
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Great little write! The "until im am come pleetly" threw me for a second, unitl I realized it was broken words, but with Stitch's comment... good work! My spelling is lousy, so I have to type on word and paste it in.
Have any interest in avaition? Looks like you long for the sky. Keep up the creative work.
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Re: broken for ever.
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:41:34 PM AEST
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kitty-girl
nice short write here--I like it.
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Re: broken for ever.
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 02:46:55 PM AEST
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well done
I hope your wings mend
and you fly high up in the sky...... |
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